Reversedragon: Chapter 1: The Spark

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Chapter 1: The Spark

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	<div class="bop-text">ok we start with david finding a room to rent that he lives in in the next book		<div class="bop-text">ok we start with david finding a room to rent that he lives in in the next book

	> ~~nor was it~~ a ~~cutesy, cartoon sort of thing~~		> [ed.25/9] Chapter 1: The Spark 0
	~~You haven't convinced me~~ of ~~that~~		I know this is a common word but... oh boy. the implications of this in context

	is the mom actually a creationist Christian or not 13		- bonnington named after mountain climber 3
	that is a hilarious thing to say if not
			> nor was it a cutesy, cartoon sort of thing 5
			you haven't convinced me of that

			- you didn't see the dragons move 5,33
			in their own way, these are garage dragons.

			> the ark 14
			is the mom actually a creationist Christian or not? that is a hilarious thing to say if not
	while if she is, it raises strange lore implications for this series. biblical dragons?? a weirder narnia??		while if she is, it raises strange lore implications for this series. biblical dragons?? a weirder narnia??

	fire observed in Dragon's den 20		- scanning everywhere for the interesting squirrel 30
			- fire observed in Dragon's den 31

	we need to establish squirrels because they're mischievous and have a life of their own 27		we need to establish squirrels because they're mischievous and have a life of their own 27

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<div class="bop-text">ok we start with david finding a room to rent that he lives in in the next book

> nor was it a cutesy, cartoon sort of thing
You haven't convinced me of that

is the mom actually a creationist Christian or not 13
that is a hilarious thing to say if not
while if she is, it raises strange lore implications for this series. biblical dragons?? a weirder narnia??

fire observed in Dragon's den 20

we need to establish squirrels because they're mischievous and have a life of their own 27
you also expect cats to be like that but not necessarily sculptures

now we have gotten into an elaborate theme of how david said you can't interfere with nature but nothing in a human yard is fully natural and everything is subject to human artifice 47
I'm struggling to figure out what this is saying about the dragons

consistently none of them believe the dragons are moving 60

there is a certain irony in how david later submits the story about squirrels and it gets rejected although this book was mostly about squirrels 63

> he's always been with you. I just gave him shape 64

> I saw you with a squirrel. where did it go? 66

> I'll get it! David cried ... only to stumble in the garden hose 67

is davids dragon the first one capable of communication 67
it's sort of like the dragons and the other game pieces around them build the superstructural fantasy story

this is literally voodoo in its simplified definition isn't it 83

letting liz's secret out 100

ok, we get a clear payoff to the notion that gawain is evidently a story made up to forget dad 106

if we're taking this painfully literally like most of this book it could be taken as how creating art, like most communication, is only tracing the outward outline of a deeper mental model 111
and david is focusing on the lineart instead of the hidden raytracing step, so he can't art
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